On 2019-08-16 07:22, Erik Rijkers wrote:
> On 2019-08-16 02:26, Stephen Frost wrote:
>> Greetings,
>>
>> * Joshua D. Drake (jd@commandprompt.com) wrote:
>>> attached
>
>> they seem to be simply removing words and removing content that is
>
> For what it's worth, I think the proposed changes are all solid
> improvements. The text reads better with them, and that's what this is
> about -- not whether the removed little text-pieces were 'true' or
> not.
>
>
> However, there is one typo:
>
> + read independently. There are many extrernal programming
>
> extrernal -> external
> (and I would say that dropping that word 'external' would be another
> little improvement)
and:
Lasty -> Lastly
importantance -> importance