On 2019-08-16 02:26, Stephen Frost wrote:
> Greetings,
>
> * Joshua D. Drake (jd@commandprompt.com) wrote:
>> attached
> they seem to be simply removing words and removing content that is
For what it's worth, I think the proposed changes are all solid
improvements. The text reads better with them, and that's what this is
about -- not whether the removed little text-pieces were 'true' or not.
However, there is one typo:
+ read independently. There are many extrernal programming
extrernal -> external
(and I would say that dropping that word 'external' would be another
little improvement)