Hi Tatsuo & Magnus,
On 11/5/18 7:48 AM, Tatsuo Ishii wrote:
>> On Mon, Nov 5, 2018 at 3:20 AM Tatsuo Ishii <ishii@sraoss.co.jp> wrote:
>>> Here are subtle changes I would like to have:
>>>
>>> (1)
>>> <p><em>Last updated: 最終更新日: 2018年8月18日</em></p>
>>>
>>> "Last updated:" is not necessary because "最終更新日:" is same in
>>> Japanese and it's redundant.
>>>
>>
>> I would suggest mayne including something like "最終更新日 (Last updated):" , to
>> make it clear lto the casual observer who doesn't know Japanese that this
>> is what it means as well.
>
> +1.
> That makes sense.
Thank you both for your feedback. Please see attached with the full list
of revisions that Tatsuo recommended.
Thanks,
Jonathan