Hi Jonathan,
> Hi Tatsuo & Magnus,
>
> On 11/5/18 7:48 AM, Tatsuo Ishii wrote:
>>> On Mon, Nov 5, 2018 at 3:20 AM Tatsuo Ishii <ishii@sraoss.co.jp> wrote:
>>>> Here are subtle changes I would like to have:
>>>>
>>>> (1)
>>>> <p><em>Last updated: 最終更新日: 2018年8月18日</em></p>
>>>>
>>>> "Last updated:" is not necessary because "最終更新日:" is same in
>>>> Japanese and it's redundant.
>>>>
>>>
>>> I would suggest mayne including something like "最終更新日 (Last updated):" , to
>>> make it clear lto the casual observer who doesn't know Japanese that this
>>> is what it means as well.
>>
>> +1.
>> That makes sense.
>
> Thank you both for your feedback. Please see attached with the full list
> of revisions that Tatsuo recommended.
Thanks. Looks good to me.
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Tatsuo Ishii
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