Re: typos in 'website 'About'-page

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От Daniel Gustafsson
Тема Re: typos in 'website 'About'-page
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Msg-id 35E6236E-79BB-4F4F-8214-99424FF7D4C3@yesql.se
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Ответ на typos in 'website 'About'-page  (Erik Rijkers <er@xs4all.nl>)
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> On 23 May 2019, at 15:18, Erik Rijkers <er@xs4all.nl> wrote:
>
> In
>  https://www.postgresql.org/about/
>
> 'Below is an inexhaustive of various features'  should be
> 'Below is an inexhaustive list of various features’
>
>
> And the following sentence seems altogether incorrect:
>
> 'As of the version 11 release in October 2018, PostgreSQL conforms to at least 160 of the 179 mandatory features for
SQL:2011Core conformance, where as of this writing, no relational database meets full conformance with this standard.' 
>
> I think the problem-phrase is  'where as of this writing' (fixing the spelling to 'whereas' doesn't really help) so I
suggestto break the above into two sentences: 
>
> 'As of the version 11 release in October 2018, PostgreSQL conforms to at least 160 of the 179 mandatory features for
SQL:2011Core conformance.  As of this writing, no relational database meets full conformance with this standard.' 
>
> I hope native speakers will correct me if I'm wrong.

While not a native speaker, I do agree that your proposed wording is easier to
read so I went ahead and applied that together with the other fix.  Thanks for
reporting!

cheers ./daniel


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