[ I think you meant to attach this to the other thread, but anyway... ]
"David G. Johnston" <david.g.johnston@gmail.com> writes:
> "...replacement_sort_tuples, which see for further details." needs
> rewording.
Hmm, "which see" is perfectly good English to my knowledge, and I'm not
sure that other possible ways of wording this would be less awkward.
> Is it worth mentioning the deprecation of exclusive backups in the notes
> introducing non-exclusive ones?
It's not clear to me that we're actually deprecating them; there did not
seem to be consensus on that.
I adopted your other suggestions. Thanks for reviewing!
regards, tom lane