Re: PostgreSQL 14 press release draft

On Mon, Sep 20, 2021 at 10:19:32PM -0400, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:

> PostgreSQL 14 provides a significant throughput boost on workloads that use many
> connections, with some benchmarks showing a 2x speedup. This release continues
> on the recent improvements the overall management of B-tree indexes by reducing
> index bloat on tables with [frequently updated
indexes](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/btree-implementation.html#BTREE-DELETION).

improvements *in* ?

> [Foreign data wrappers](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/sql-createforeigndatawrapper.html),
> used to work with federated workloads across PostgreSQL and other databases, can

It'd be clearer to write "used for working".
"Used to work" sounds like it no longer works.

> PostgreSQL 14 extends its performance gains to its
[vacuuming](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/routine-vacuuming.html)

to *the* vacuuming system ?

> indexes and now allows autovacuum to analyze partitioned tables and propagate
> information to its parents.

This was reverted last month.

> The choice of compression for PostgreSQL's [TOAST](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/storage-toast.html)
> system, which is used to store larger data like blocks of text or geometries,
> can [now be
configured](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/runtime-config-client.html#GUC-DEFAULT-TOAST-COMPRESSION).

Remove "the choice of" ?

> The [extended systems](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/planner-stats.html#PLANNER-STATS-EXTENDED)

s/systems/statistics/

> includes many improvements in PostgreSQL 14, including the ability to apply
> extend statistics on expressions. Additionally,

s/extend/extended/

-- 
Justin