>> Hello Bradley & Tatsuo-san,
>>
>>>> ... references to the protocol version lacks homogeneity.
>>>> ... I'd suggest to keep "the vX.0 protocol" for a short version,
>>>> and "the version X.0 protocol" for long ...
>>>
>>> I agree. Change made.
>>
>> Patch applies cleanly. Doc build ok.
>>
>> One part talks about "terminating line", the other of "termination
>> line". I wonder whether one is better than the other?
>
> I am not a native English speaker so I maybe wrong... for me, current
> usage of "terminating line", and "termination line" looks correct. The
> former refers to concrete example thus uses "the", while the latter
> refers to more general case thus uses "an".
>
> BTW, I think the patch should apply to master and REL_11_STABLE
> branches at least. But should this be applied to other back branches
> as well?
I have marked this as "ready for committer".
Best regards,
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Tatsuo Ishii
SRA OSS, Inc. Japan
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