Dean,
* Dean Rasheed (dean.a.rasheed@gmail.com) wrote:
> [There's also a typo further down -- "filter out the records which are
> visible", should be "not visible"]
I agree, that's not really worded quite right. I've reworded this along
the lines of what you suggested (though not exactly- if you get a chance
to review it, that'd be great) and pushed it, so we don't forget to do
so later.
> What do you think of the attached rewording?
Regarding the larger/earlier paragraph, Would be great if you could
comment on my latest suggestion.
Thanks!
Stephen