Re: Press release, hopefully final draft this time
От | Robert Treat |
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Тема | Re: Press release, hopefully final draft this time |
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Msg-id | 1096492528.2165.62.camel@camel обсуждение исходный текст |
Ответ на | Re: Press release, hopefully final draft this time (Lamar Owen <lowen@pari.edu>) |
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Re: Press release, hopefully final draft this time
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Список | pgsql-advocacy |
On Wed, 2004-09-29 at 11:33, Lamar Owen wrote: > On Wednesday 29 September 2004 00:38, Roderick A. Anderson wrote: > > PostgreSQL is distributed under a BSD license, which allows use and > > distribution -- without licensing fees -- for commercial and > > non-commercial applications. > > > (Might have to lose or replace the dashes.) > > The sentence flows fine without the dashes. I would add a 'both' between > 'for' and 'commercial' though. If one wants to get really specific add an > 'any' prior to 'licensing fees' in that clause. The 'any' might be overkill, > though. > > Rewritten: > "PostgreSQL is distributed under a BSD license, which allows use and > distribution without any licensing fees for both commercial and > non-commercial applications." > > Or: > "PostgreSQL is distributed under a BSD license, which allows use and > distribution without licensing fees of any kind for either commercial or > non-commercial applications." > > I tend to like the either....or construct there. one more tweak? "PostgreSQL is distributed under a BSD license, which allows for use and distribution without licensing fees of any kind in either commercial or non-commercial applications." Robert Treat -- Build A Brighter Lamp :: Linux Apache {middleware} PostgreSQL
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