Re: Updates for PostgreSQL.org one-click installer download pages

On Jul 14, 2016, at 10:47 AM, Magnus Hagander <magnus@hagander.net> wrote:

On Thu, Jul 14, 2016 at 4:11 PM, Jonathan S. Katz <jkatz@postgresql.org> wrote:

Hi,

On Jul 14, 2016, at 8:54 AM, Marc Linster <marc.linster@enterprisedb.com> wrote:

Team:

here is an updated patch that removes the references to cloud, bare metal etc. 

Sorry for the delay - too much travel

M.

This has passed technical review.  If you have any comments on language please share otherwise I will apply the patch tomorrow morning.

I suggest removing "by enterprisedb" from the headline of each section. It's already included in the body. So headlines just say "Interactive Installer" but the body says it's the edb one, similar to how we do for the openscg ones.

"The installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with PostgreSQL on Linux (Red Hat family Linux including CentOS/Fedora/Scientific/Oracle variants), Debian GNU/Linux and derivatives, Ubuntu Linux and derivatives, SuSE and OpenSuSE)."

Has one ")" too many - remove the one after "variants" to make it a proper sentence.

It looks like unrelated changes to the bigsql texts? Whitespace only? If it's whitespace only drop it. If it's actual content changes, lets separate this in separate commits.

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