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Unclear Wording

От
PG Doc comments form
Дата:
The following documentation comment has been logged on the website:

Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/plpgsql-errors-and-messages.html
Description:

Dear Sirs,
  From the page on RAISE ...
  I read this 3 times and tripped over "write a format", which should be use
(or specify) a format string ...

Current:
After level if any, you can write a format (which must be a simple string
literal, not an expression). The format string specifies the error message
text to be reported. 

Suggested Rewrite:
After level if any, you can specify a format string (which must be a simple
string literal, not an expression). The format string specifies the error
message text to be reported. 

PS: Thank you for some of the best documentation ever published!

The link, just in case:
https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/plpgsql-errors-and-messages.html

Re: Unclear Wording

От
Bruce Momjian
Дата:
On Mon, Jun  6, 2022 at 10:11:54PM +0000, PG Doc comments form wrote:
> The following documentation comment has been logged on the website:
> 
> Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/plpgsql-errors-and-messages.html
> Description:
> 
> Dear Sirs,
>   From the page on RAISE ...
>   I read this 3 times and tripped over "write a format", which should be use
> (or specify) a format string ...
> 
> Current:
> After level if any, you can write a format (which must be a simple string
> literal, not an expression). The format string specifies the error message
> text to be reported. 
> 
> Suggested Rewrite:
> After level if any, you can specify a format string (which must be a simple
> string literal, not an expression). The format string specifies the error
> message text to be reported. 

Good idea, patch attached.

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  Bruce Momjian  <bruce@momjian.us>        https://momjian.us
  EDB                                      https://enterprisedb.com

  Indecision is a decision.  Inaction is an action.  Mark Batterson


Вложения

Re: Unclear Wording

От
Laurenz Albe
Дата:
On Tue, 2022-06-07 at 20:15 -0400, Bruce Momjian wrote:
> > Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/plpgsql-errors-and-messages.html
> > Description:
> > 
> > Dear Sirs,
> >    From the page on RAISE ...
> >    I read this 3 times and tripped over "write a format", which should be use
> > (or specify) a format string ...
> > 
> > Current:
> > After level if any, you can write a format (which must be a simple string
> > literal, not an expression). The format string specifies the error message
> > text to be reported. 
> > 
> > Suggested Rewrite:
> > After level if any, you can specify a format string (which must be a simple
> > string literal, not an expression). The format string specifies the error
> > message text to be reported. 
> 
> Good idea, patch attached.

+1

Yours,
Laurenz Albe



Re: Unclear Wording

От
Peter Eisentraut
Дата:
On 08.06.22 02:15, Bruce Momjian wrote:
> -    you can write a <replaceable class="parameter">format</replaceable>
> +    you can specify a <replaceable class="parameter">format string</replaceable>

The "format" refers to the earlier synopsis, so that should be changed, 
too.  Or put the "string" outside the <replaceable> element.




Re: Unclear Wording

От
Bruce Momjian
Дата:
On Wed, Jun  8, 2022 at 07:49:07PM +0200, Peter Eisentraut wrote:
> On 08.06.22 02:15, Bruce Momjian wrote:
> > -    you can write a <replaceable class="parameter">format</replaceable>
> > +    you can specify a <replaceable class="parameter">format string</replaceable>
> 
> The "format" refers to the earlier synopsis, so that should be changed, too.
> Or put the "string" outside the <replaceable> element.

I thought about moving it outside, so I did that in this patch.

-- 
  Bruce Momjian  <bruce@momjian.us>        https://momjian.us
  EDB                                      https://enterprisedb.com

  Indecision is a decision.  Inaction is an action.  Mark Batterson


Вложения

Re: Unclear Wording

От
Bruce Momjian
Дата:
On Wed, Jun  8, 2022 at 03:07:01PM -0400, Bruce Momjian wrote:
> On Wed, Jun  8, 2022 at 07:49:07PM +0200, Peter Eisentraut wrote:
> > On 08.06.22 02:15, Bruce Momjian wrote:
> > > -    you can write a <replaceable class="parameter">format</replaceable>
> > > +    you can specify a <replaceable class="parameter">format string</replaceable>
> > 
> > The "format" refers to the earlier synopsis, so that should be changed, too.
> > Or put the "string" outside the <replaceable> element.
> 
> I thought about moving it outside, so I did that in this patch.

Patch applied to all supported versions of Postgres.

-- 
  Bruce Momjian  <bruce@momjian.us>        https://momjian.us
  EDB                                      https://enterprisedb.com

  Indecision is a decision.  Inaction is an action.  Mark Batterson