Обсуждение: pgsql: doc: Wording and formatting improvements in new logical decoding

doc: Wording and formatting improvements in new logical decoding docs

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http://git.postgresql.org/pg/commitdiff/50709a1d427831d48a5aa14655e9f57e3721a06b

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doc/src/sgml/logicaldecoding.sgml    |  184 +++++++++++++++++++++++-----------
doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_recvlogical.sgml |    8 ++
2 files changed, 131 insertions(+), 61 deletions(-)

Hi,

On 2014-10-31 02:57:21 +0000, Peter Eisentraut wrote:
> doc: Wording and formatting improvements in new logical decoding docs

Thanks for looking.

One thing I noticed is that:
-# pg_recvlogical -d postgres --slot test --create-slot
-# pg_recvlogical -d postgres --slot test --start -f -
-CTRL-Z
-# psql -d postgres -c "INSERT INTO data(data) VALUES('4');"
-# fg
+$ pg_recvlogical -d postgres --slot test --create-slot
+$ pg_recvlogical -d postgres --slot test --start -f -
+<keycombo action="simul"><keycap>Control</><keycap>D</></>
+$ psql -d postgres -c "INSERT INTO data(data) VALUES('4');"
+$ fg

looks wrong to me. Note the s/Z/D/. Or was that intentional?

Also you sometimes replaced walsender interface by
"streaming-replication interface" and sometimes by 'streaming
replication interface'. Im generally not sure that replacement is an
improvement, but it should be consistent if done.

Greetings,

Andres Freund

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On 10/31/14 2:34 AM, Andres Freund wrote:
> One thing I noticed is that:
> -# pg_recvlogical -d postgres --slot test --create-slot
> -# pg_recvlogical -d postgres --slot test --start -f -
> -CTRL-Z
> -# psql -d postgres -c "INSERT INTO data(data) VALUES('4');"
> -# fg
> +$ pg_recvlogical -d postgres --slot test --create-slot
> +$ pg_recvlogical -d postgres --slot test --start -f -
> +<keycombo action="simul"><keycap>Control</><keycap>D</></>
> +$ psql -d postgres -c "INSERT INTO data(data) VALUES('4');"
> +$ fg
>
> looks wrong to me. Note the s/Z/D/. Or was that intentional?

Fart.

>
> Also you sometimes replaced walsender interface by
> "streaming-replication interface" and sometimes by 'streaming
> replication interface'. Im generally not sure that replacement is an
> improvement, but it should be consistent if done.

Yeah, it was only one.  I fixed that, too.