On 18.07.20 19:17, Erik Rijkers wrote:
>
> Hi,
>
> I went through the architecture.sgml file once, and accumulated the
> attached edits.
>
> There are still far too many Unneeded Capitals On Words for my taste
> but I have not changed many of those. We could use some more opinions
> on that, I suppose. (if it becomes too silent maybe include the
> pgsql-hackers again?)
>
> Thanks,
>
>
> Erik Rijkers
The attached patch contains:
- integration of Erik's suggestions
- coordination of terms in text, graphic and glossary
- some changes in upper-case usage
- fewer usage of <firstterm> with two exceptions: The first chapter 4.1
emphasize all important terms to help beginners in their learning
process; chapter 4.5. emphasize the term 'autovacuum' to straighten the
fact that - despite its similarities - the tool autovacuum is something
else than the SQL command vacuum.
--
Jürgen Purtz