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I still can't get cvs to work properly for me with pgfoundry, so
here's my quick notes:
* There appears to be a stray character after the words
"Improved Multiprocessor (SMP) Performance:"
* I still think a comma looks better after "dual-core" :)
* More funny characters after "<link here>."
* Perhaps make "About PostgreSQL" its own section, like the others?:
About PostgreSQL
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Other than that, looks great!
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Greg Sabino Mullane greg@turnstep.com
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