Re: PostgreSQL 17 Beta 1 release announcement draft

Hi,

On Wed, May 15, 2024 at 09:45:35PM -0400, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> Attached is a copy of the PostgreSQL 17 Beta 1 release announcement draft.

Thanks for working on it!

I've one comment:

> PostgreSQL 17 also introduces a new view,
[`pg_wait_events`](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/17/view-pg-wait-events.html),which provides descriptions about wait
eventsand can be combined with `pg_stat_activity` to give more insight into an operation.
 

Instead of "to give more insight into an operation", what about "to give more
insight about what a session is waiting for (should it be active)"?

Regards,

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Bertrand Drouvot
PostgreSQL Contributors Team
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