I gave this a look. I first reformatted it so I could read it; that's 0001. Second I changed all the long <link> items into <xref>s, which
Thanks! I didn't know about xrefs, that is a big improvement.
are shorter and don't have to repeat the title of the refered to page. (Of course, this changes the link to be in the same style as every other link in our documentation; some people don't like it. But it's our style.)
There are some mistakes. "Tupple" is most glaring one -- not just the typo but also the fact that it goes to sql-revoke. A few definitions we'll want to modify. Nothing too big. In general I like this work and I think we should have it in pg13.
Please bikeshed the definition of your favorite term, and suggest what other terms to add. No pointing out of mere typos yet, please.
Jürgen mentioned off-list that the man page doesn't build. I was going to look into that, but if anyone has more familiarity with that, I'm listening.
I think we should have the terms Consistency, Isolation, Durability.