On Tue, Dec 6, 2016 at 1:54 PM, Fujii Masao <masao.fujii@gmail.com> wrote:
> + <literal>backup</>: The WAL sender is sending a backup.
>
> Seems it's better to use "This WAL sender" rather than "The WAL sender"
> like the descriptions of other fields.
>
> There are two descriptions of "streaming" value. You need to remove
> either of them.
>
> + <literal>streaming</>: The WAL sender is catching up with the
> + primary.
>
> "walsender is catching up with the primary" sounds a bit strange to me.
> What about "This WAL sender's connected standby server is catching up
> with the primary"?
>
> + <literal>streaming</>: The WAL sender has caught up with the
> + primary and is streaming changes.
>
> Same as above.
Agreed with all that. Attached is an updated version.
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Michael