> "Users who have skipped one or more update releases may need to run > additional, post-update steps; " > > The comma should be removed. > > "please see the release notes for earlier versions for details." > > Use of 'for' twice is grammatically incorrect; I am partial to "please > see the release notes from earlier versions for details." but could > also see "please see the release notes for earlier versions to get > details."
Interestingly, I think this language has been unmodified for awhile. Upon reading it, I agree, and took your suggestions.