Please review tags, links in presskit ASAP

WWW team,

I need to get the translators started by Monday.  After that, 
corrections will become very hard to make.

Can someone (or several someones) review the links and tags for the 
presskit and feature list for 8.3?  Punctuation/spelling corrections are 
welcome too.

The files are available from pgfoundry Press project CVS, or at:
http://pgfoundry.org/docman/view.php/1000047/2632/presskit.zip

Thanks!

--Josh Berkus