While my colleague is working on translating
doc/src/sgml/ref/create_role.sgml into Japanese, he has found
following sentence is hard to parse:
The rules for which initial
role membership options are enabled described below in the
<literal>IN ROLE</literal>, <literal>ROLE</literal>, and
<literal>ADMIN</literal> clauses.
Maybe we need "are" in front of "described"?
Attached is the patch for that.
Best reagards,
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Tatsuo Ishii
SRA OSS LLC
English: http://www.sraoss.co.jp/index_en/
Japanese:http://www.sraoss.co.jp
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_role.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_role.sgml
index 27e48da12a..f72ba9affc 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_role.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_role.sgml
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ in sync when changing the above synopsis!
During role creation it is possible to immediately assign the newly created
role to be a member of an existing role, and also assign existing roles
to be members of the newly created role. The rules for which initial
- role membership options are enabled described below in the
+ role membership options are enabled are described below in the
<literal>IN ROLE</literal>, <literal>ROLE</literal>, and
<literal>ADMIN</literal> clauses. The <xref linkend="sql-grant"/>
command has fine-grained option control during membership creation,