Re: doc review for v13

On Thu, Sep 10, 2020 at 03:58:31PM +0900, Michael Paquier wrote:
> On Wed, Sep 09, 2020 at 09:37:42AM -0500, Justin Pryzby wrote:
> > I've added a few more.
> 
> I have done an extra round of review on this patch series, and applied
> what looked obvious to me (basically the points already discussed
> upthread).  Some parts applied down to 9.6 for the docs.

Thanks.  Here's the remainder, with some new ones.

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Justin