Re: Some comments on the marketing texts

On Fri, 2003-10-10 at 16:20, Josh Berkus wrote:
> Ryan,
>
> > Excellent.  I am going to use Peter's comments as a starting place.
> > Should I send my writing to the list, to your email or another place?
>
> The list is perfect.
>

Ryan, some things to keep in mind:

1) The target audience of the advocacy site is PHB's, not technical
people.

2) Any change you suggest will need to be translated into a slew of
different languages, so keep your words clear and simple.

3) The target audience of the advocacy site is PHB's, not technical
people.


Robert Treat

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