Обсуждение: Minor document typo
Hi, doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml seems to have a minor typo: In pg_stat_database_conflicts section (around line 3621) we have: <para> Number of uses of logical slots in this database that have been canceled due to old snapshots or too low a <xref linkend="guc-wal-level"/> on the primary </para></entry> I think "too low a" should be "too low" ('a' is not necessary). Attached is the patch. Best reagards, -- Tatsuo Ishii SRA OSS LLC English: http://www.sraoss.co.jp/index_en/ Japanese:http://www.sraoss.co.jp diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml index 053da8d6e4..56e79b1304 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml @@ -3618,7 +3618,7 @@ description | Waiting for a newly initialized WAL file to reach durable storage </para> <para> Number of uses of logical slots in this database that have been - canceled due to old snapshots or too low a <xref linkend="guc-wal-level"/> + canceled due to old snapshots or too low <xref linkend="guc-wal-level"/> on the primary </para></entry> </row>
On Tue, 23 Apr 2024 at 23:17, Tatsuo Ishii <ishii@sraoss.co.jp> wrote: > Number of uses of logical slots in this database that have been > canceled due to old snapshots or too low a <xref linkend="guc-wal-level"/> > on the primary > > I think "too low a" should be "too low" ('a' is not > necessary). Attached is the patch. The existing text looks fine to me. The other form would use "of a" and become "too low of a wal_level on the primary". "too low wal_level on the primary" sounds wrong to my native English-speaking ear. There's some discussion in [1] that might be of interest to you. David [1] https://www.reddit.com/r/grammar/comments/qr9z6e/i_need_help_with_sothat_adj_of_a_sing_noun/?ref=share&ref_source=link
>> I think "too low a" should be "too low" ('a' is not >> necessary). Attached is the patch. > > The existing text looks fine to me. The other form would use "of a" > and become "too low of a wal_level on the primary". > > "too low wal_level on the primary" sounds wrong to my native > English-speaking ear. > > There's some discussion in [1] that might be of interest to you. > > David > > [1] https://www.reddit.com/r/grammar/comments/qr9z6e/i_need_help_with_sothat_adj_of_a_sing_noun/?ref=share&ref_source=link Thank you for the explanation. English is difficult :-) Just out of a curiosity, is it possible to say "low a wal_level on the primary"? (just "too" is removed) -- Tatsuo Ishii SRA OSS LLC English: http://www.sraoss.co.jp/index_en/ Japanese:http://www.sraoss.co.jp
On Wed, 24 Apr 2024 at 00:11, Tatsuo Ishii <ishii@sraoss.co.jp> wrote: > Just out of a curiosity, is it possible to say "low a wal_level on the > primary"? (just "too" is removed) Prefixing the adjective with "too" means it's beyond the acceptable range. "This coffee is too hot". https://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/too David