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Minor documentation fixes

От
Elena Indrupskaya
Дата:
Hello everybody,

My colleagues from the Postgres Pro documentation team and I noticed a 
few minor inconsistencies in recently updated sections of the PostgreSQL 
15 documentation. The attached patch fixes them.

Two contributor names in the Release Notes are changed to match the 
names of commit authors with those in the Acknowledgements list.

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Elena Indrupskaya
Lead Technical Writer
Postgres Professional http://www.postgrespro.com
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Re: Minor documentation fixes

От
Michael Paquier
Дата:
On Tue, Sep 27, 2022 at 03:58:10PM +0300, Elena Indrupskaya wrote:
> My colleagues from the Postgres Pro documentation team and I noticed a few
> minor inconsistencies in recently updated sections of the PostgreSQL 15
> documentation. The attached patch fixes them.
>
> Two contributor names in the Release Notes are changed to match the names of
> commit authors with those in the Acknowledgements list.

This is mostly in the area of the release notes.  Bruce?
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Michael

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Re: Minor documentation fixes

От
Bruce Momjian
Дата:
On Tue, Sep 27, 2022 at 03:58:10PM +0300, Elena Indrupskaya wrote:
> Hello everybody,
> 
> My colleagues from the Postgres Pro documentation team and I noticed a few
> minor inconsistencies in recently updated sections of the PostgreSQL 15
> documentation. The attached patch fixes them.

> diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
> index 2fe902eed2..53b178da95 100644
> --- a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
> +++ b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
> @@ -6757,11 +6757,11 @@ local0.*    /var/log/postgresql
>           For example, if syncing the data directory takes 25 seconds and
>           thereafter resetting unlogged relations takes 8 seconds, and if this
>           setting has the default value of 10 seconds, then a messages will be
>           logged for syncing the data directory after it has been in progress
>           for 10 seconds and again after it has been in progress for 20 seconds,
> -         but nothing will be logged for resetting unlogged operations.
> +         but nothing will be logged for resetting unlogged relations.
>          </para>
>         </listitem>
>       </varlistentry>

Sorry I am just getting to this item.  You are correct this needs fixing
and I have applied this to master and PG 15.  I will send a separate
email about the release note changes.

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  Bruce Momjian  <bruce@momjian.us>        https://momjian.us
  EDB                                      https://enterprisedb.com

  Indecision is a decision.  Inaction is an action.  Mark Batterson




Re: Minor documentation fixes

От
Bruce Momjian
Дата:
On Tue, Sep 27, 2022 at 03:58:10PM +0300, Elena Indrupskaya wrote:
> Hello everybody,
> 
> My colleagues from the Postgres Pro documentation team and I noticed a few
> minor inconsistencies in recently updated sections of the PostgreSQL 15
> documentation. The attached patch fixes them.
> 
> Two contributor names in the Release Notes are changed to match the names of
> commit authors with those in the Acknowledgements list.

Wow, you and Peter Eisentraut did better job of researching these two
author names than I did.  I also applied the diff that removed the
comma, but the skipped the one that removed the "that" since I was told
not to use "that" when it isn't needed.

Thanks.

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  Bruce Momjian  <bruce@momjian.us>        https://momjian.us
  EDB                                      https://enterprisedb.com

  Indecision is a decision.  Inaction is an action.  Mark Batterson