Re: Draft of 9.2 beta announcement, please revise/improve

On 05/06/2012 01:19 PM, Joshua Berkus wrote:
> All,

>
> We depend on our community test the next verson in order to guarantee that it is high-performance and bug-free.
Pleasedownload PostgreSQL 9.2 Beta and try it with your workloads and applications as soon as you can, and give
feedbackto the PostgreSQL developers.  More information on how to test and report issues in PostgreSQL is here [LINK]. 
>
> PostgreSQL 9.2 beta, including binaries and installers for multiple platforms from our download page [LINK].

Only thing I can see is possibly change above to:

PostgreSQL 9.2 beta, including binaries and installers for multiple
platforms can be downloaded from here [LINK].

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Adrian Klaver
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