Re: Doc typo?

Tatsuo Ishii <ishii@sraoss.co.jp> writes:
> While translating the manual into Japanese, I had a hard time to
> parse following sentence in func.sgml:

>     Note that granting users the EXECUTE privilege on the
>     <function>pg_read_file()</function>, or related, functions allows them the
>     ability to read any file on the server which the database can read and
>     that those reads bypass all in-database privilege checks.

> It seems there's an extra comma between "related" and "functions". Am I correct?

I'd move the comma not remove it; and I think "the pg_read_file()" is
pretty bad English too.  So perhaps

     Note that granting users the EXECUTE privilege on
     <function>pg_read_file()</function>, or related functions, allows them the
     ability to read any file on the server which the database can read and
     that those reads bypass all in-database privilege checks.

            regards, tom lane